i just saw a girl throw up on her own face. also i want to talk about descriptions i've been reading in fanfics on here. don't get me wrong, write fanfics how you like, but this is my opinion on how you should - or could - write them......
welcome to Honk's Guide to the Dos and Don'ts of Description™!
Step One; Basic Shit to Describe
A lot of people tend to say bullshit like "show us, don't tell us." which is true. You should show. If you just tell us it it's just pointless exposition. If you want to write good literature you need to be able to accurately describe WHAT'S happening rather than WHY it's happening.
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